Cartoonist Notes
Flies on poo is a common theme in comics. I originally thought of them just telling the cow, "We want to discuss improving your output." but someone told me they didn't get that so I changed it to include the word poo which have been too in your face. I still think sometimes I should just leave the implied poo, instead of the obvious poo.
I like that your eye goes right to the flies. They are front and center on the frame even though they don't take up a lot of space. I could stand to learn from some composition classes and sometimes I think I need to make my work more cartoony than realistic. The flies are definitely more cartoony.
Flies on poo is a common theme in comics. I originally thought of them just telling the cow, "We want to discuss improving your output." but someone told me they didn't get that so I changed it to include the word poo which have been too in your face. I still think sometimes I should just leave the implied poo, instead of the obvious poo.
I like that your eye goes right to the flies. They are front and center on the frame even though they don't take up a lot of space. I could stand to learn from some composition classes and sometimes I think I need to make my work more cartoony than realistic. The flies are definitely more cartoony.
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